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Originally Posted by aofelix
nights where you don't plan anything but just go out with the idea to shake life up... thats the best way to have fun.
i like the gym, cooking, music and all that boring stuff too. seriously i like all those things, you like all those things, we should so make babies.
im studying to be a doctor so i can save peoples lives like batman and ultimately be like house and christian troy from nip/tuck.
authenticity is key in life, you have to be comfortable, let loose and see whats important. alcohol helps with this.
i love women, i adore women. i'm close to my mum and my sister. they've taught me to treat women with respect. i feel like i can be real and connect on every level (other than periods) when i talk to girls. yeah i love women.
what am i looking for? what are we all looking for? a girl whos good looking is awesome, but its the same as having a nice painting to look at. its really nice to look at and puts a smile on my face for a while but an awesome meaningful song gets right into my head and is so much more interesting and intriguing.
if you didn't get that, look at the next profile cos you're way too hot, cool and amazing. if you did...
xxx
hows that guys? i rly wanna make a profile now so i can get girls whilst chilling at home, eating training and watching the wire.
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To be fair I’d completely re-write but that’s just my view.
Don’ use ‘like’ it lacks passion, its an average AFC phrase.
Love cooking, enjoy the gym, can’t live without music etc.
most adult girls are not looking for comic book hero’s,I want to save peoples and make a difference, no reference to batman.
Remove the whole authenticity sentence, girls know authenticity is important don’t shove it down her throat the only thing going down her throat should be your cock. Saying alcohol helps with life is sending out the wrong message as well
Saying you love women is all well and dandy don’t you think she’s heard this before? Try and demonstrate this in another way.
I’ve always had a problem with ‘what am i looking for’, its nothing to do with you mate. Sure go down this route and show her you have standards but try and add in what she gets out of the deal.
I can’t put my finger on it but this is somehow weak ‘if you didn't get that, look at the next profile cos you're way too hot, cool and amazing. if you did’