I'm not taking anything to heart and I'm learning a lot from you guys, so thanks for all the input. I think the park setting is the right place, as it is a route to the train station. That whole story is there so that it displays the trust I've already invested in her which I can see her being flattered by in the first instance.

I can't see myself ever saying 'your cute, i thought I'de come over and introduce myself', this just seems completely mental.