hey i just need some tips i went out last night and i practiced some openers that i just learnt it was my first night last night and i gat a number so proud of myself it happend out side a club i was standing there with my friend and a girl come up to us to see if we had a light i said no but my friend has so he give her a light so i thought yea i will start a conversation i dident use an opener as dident feel was necisary as she had come to us i asked her
(me) "you all done for the night then al clubbed out?"
(her) "yea, have you just come out?"
(me) "no i just come to see what the entrance fee was just come from another club how was it in there?"
(her) "yea good its my friends 19th birthday today" (she points to her friend slumped on a pathway)
(me) " looks like she had a good time"
(her) "she laughs i says yea im a bit drunk at the moment and im dressed a bit slutty.
(me) "(i interupt) yea you do a bit (i smile) im only joking you look ok.
(her) "i dont usually dress like this (she smiles)
(me) "dont worry i think you look cute, sorry whats your name?"
(her) "Annemarie"
(me) "Dan" ( i put my hand out to do a squeeze test and she squeezes back)
do you no how cute you are"
(her) "aww thankyou so are you i could eat u up with a spoon"
(me) "woo you going a bit far in the relationship arent you at least by me a drink first (i smile)"
(her) "(laugh) arent the men supposed to buy the drinks".
(me) "well im no ordanary man"
(her) "are you not"
(me) "listen i got to go i think you are really cute and i would love to talk too you more can i take your nomber and we can go for a drink"
(her) "yea if you can remember my name (i acctually forgot it at this point)
(me) "it beggiiins with a c"
(her) "NO!"
(me) whats my name then"
(her) "arr dan"
(me) "no its darren"
(her) "darren ?"
(me) " darren ? no im dan"
(her) "what? didnt you say your name was darren"
(me) "no you said i was darren im dan"
(her) "what i said darren"
(me) " no you said dan, dident she say darren? (to my friend)he says yea.
(her) "oh i was thinking that in my head but must have said darren (laughs)
(me) "thats ok so what was your name?"
(her) "annmarie, (me) "aw" (hug her dosent pull away hugs me back)
(me) whats your nomber
(her) (gives me number)
(me) "ok il give you a txt with my number"
(her) " you better"
"i will ( gives me a hug and kiss on the cheek then on the other one)
( i then go )

this was pretty much how it went i txt her in the morning to give her my number but did not get a reply what do you think will she reply i did make some amature mistakes like forgetting her name so had to confuse her so she forgot about the point of it wich worked in my favor but what could i do better and what was good this girl was very hot by the way but i stayed confident and my friend said i did a good job do you reckon she will txt back and when is the usual time for this to happen.

does anyone have some good negs to use and material to use after the opener. thanks
dan and need a nickname any advice on one im rubish with nicknames.