Wow start talking to some random girl on fbook earlier, like a 7 but randomly has that sex factor if you know what i mean. add her, talk to her 3 hours later. So bad.

Me
Wow this relationship is so over!
00:00Hannah
excuse me?
00:01Me
I just thought i'd get your attention a little Hi, im aaron
00:01Hannah
ohh aha, fair enough!
hello aaron
00:02Me
Hi again So where are you from Hannah?
00:03Hannah
im from queensbury , which is near bradford haha! you?
00:03Me
halifax, which is actually halifax!
00:04Hannah
ohhhh, so ten minutes away from me!
00:05Me
Yep, probably closer, I live just below illingworth.
Is that your natural hair colour in your picture? its nice
00:06Hannah
unfortunately its not </3
00:06Me
Thats a shame, why would you die your hair ginger?
00:09Hannah
because its a lovely colour!
00:11Me
ha, i know that i've just said it, im all down for ginger people, espeically when they are cute like you
00:11Hannah
thanksss
00:12Me
I wish i was magic you know, i'd so know how to change the subject haha
wow that was so to the wrong person
00:12Hannah
aha fair enough
00:13Me
right this is for you
do you have msn/phone number im coming off this now.
00:14Hannah is offline.

I don't know where i fucked up, somebody point it out?

just seemed a bit lame, creepy and unnatural to me if im honest. have you met this girl before? if not, please don't randomly message girls on the internet and then ask the question "where did i go wrong?"... you went wrong randomly messaging them.

trying too hard:
"I wish i was magic you know, i'd so know how to change the subject haha"
"ha, i know that i've just said it, im all down for ginger people, espeically when they are cute like you"
"I just thought i'd get your attention a little Hi, im aaron"

you haven't given the girl any reasons to give you her number or MSN. the most positive attribute you showed is either a) you live 10 minutes away from her or b) you like ginger girls.

"I wish i was magic you know, i'd so know how to change the subject haha"

that was generally to the wrong person my man.
and cool cool, im just learning.
I can't get better at this without asking right?

facebook should just be a past time. even if a girl messages you on facebook, it can be out of sheer boredom (and mean nothing).

im not good at 'pua' but i can tell this interaction was really bad. a girl about 15 mins ago actually explained to me how this 'loser' sent a message which was a bit more over the top than yours.

if you have FB, send us an add and we'll chat some more if you like... just building a PUA circle.

dude fuck facebook,
get off ya ass and approach face to face, you'll learn so much more, any chode can portray confidence behind a monitor, it takes alot more skill to successfully approach in field.
im not trying to bust your balls, just advising that if you want to improve your seduction skills and learn how to better yourself, get the fuck out the house.

You are to apologetic, give to many compliments and generally come off as needy in that convo. Take Wake's advice and go out and approach face to face. Try hold a conversation, I struggle with this as well, that is not an interview. Stay away from the question barrage, just talk about random things and make her laugh.

halifax, which is actually halifax!
00:04Hannah
ohhhh, so ten minutes away from me!

I might be reading this wrong, but here she actually show some excitement that you live close to her. I'm not that good at online game so I can't give more specific advice however.

-Loke

Also, you can't guarantee it was a blow out just because she went offline, could be other reasons such as computer crashing, laptop battery dying etc etc

U WILL NEVER EVER get a girl on facebook after 10 mins

it takes ages... to be honest aswell... u shouldnt have randoms on ur facebook, chances of meetin a girl off there that u never met are VERY SLIM unless she is a fat mess.

Aswell as that... I just thought i'd get your attention a little Hi, im aaron" basically say, i like the look of u and wanna speak 2 u

NOPE, because ur not using voice inflections its difficult to have a convo online and neg, and take the mik.... u need to just talk at first... get a little comfort

then start with all the piss take