Your pictures are great, perfect
you are a good looking lad - you show a topless pic but its at the beach so it doesnt seem posy as attention is draw to the fish, shows you are in good nicmonkey drinking beer is a hook for girls
model shot is great i would probably add that as your main picture

-all you need to do now is show in your txt you are not a cock

Your pictures have hooked the chick, you just need to give her reason to chat to you


Generally i would say most of the text is irrelivent and drivel that you have on there and would scrap it