Hi,

Just joined, interested in PUA for self-improvement with women. I've just thought of an opener (my first!) and I was wondering if I could get advice on making it shorter and sharper without compromising on the basic structure of it (time constraint, rooting it in context to avoid suspicion etc.)

(opens to group) "Hey guys, I've only got a minute before I gotta get back to my friends but we're having a debate, my 2-year old cousin loves smartphones. He's a lovable, chubby magpie and if he hasn't got one he throws mad tantrums constantly. Is he addicted to it (watching God knows what... )?

Cheers guys,

Lupus