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Hey guys, this is my first field report so please edit me when necessary, all criticism welcome :D

We docked up in salalah(OMAN) about a week and a half ago now, and i've been meaning to write this report since then, just haven't had time, just a minute or two here and there.

Right, for those of you have been to oman will know, theres not much there. So we went to the hilton hotel. In there was a little bar which we went in, with a japenese female band playing. We sat down, opposite table to us were some of the other lads, and behind us on a table were two swedish girls. The other lads went up, started talking to them and did the usual afc stuff, which resulted in the ignoring of them by the girls after about 2 minutes and them carrying on talking swedish. The one girl was about a 7, but with her was a girl about a 9, swedish, intelligent looking, blonde with stylish glasses.
Anyway, ten minutes passed and me and my mate(who is basically my wing),decided that i should make an approach as he has read some of the pua books i lent him. So i turned round 90 degrees in my chair, so my body was tilted away from them. I opened with an opinion opener:

ME: Girls, can i ask your opinion?
THEM: yeah, ok
ME: My friend has been away for 4 months and his girlfriend has started seeing someone else, but decided she wants an open relationship with him too, do you think he should stand by her?
THEM: I'm not sure why?
ME: well, he's the commitment type of person, but he thinks (turned chair to slightly round towards them, and moved nearer their table) that if he stays with her, she is just going to lose her feeling for him, and staying with her makes him look like a pushover.
THEM: Yeah, i think he should break up with her, i would never cheat on my boyfriend(7).
ME: (turned and faced 7) if he was away for that long, you would need someone to fulfill your needs.
7: I wouldn't i think i could last that long without anyone, as long as we could talk to each other, but i see where she is coming from, it must be hard for her, why are you out in salalah anyway?
ME: On a warship thats just come in.
9: Is that the english one?
ME: (NEG) does she always interrupt when you talking?
9: laughs
7: whats your job on there?
ME: what do you do?
7: I am here with my friend, she is an international banker.
ME: cool, i help maintain the warships weapon systems.
One of the other lads comes over and trys to worm his way in, faisl miserably, by this point, i have learned there names, maria(9) and eva(7).
ME:well, my friends are waiting for me, im going to have to go back to them, (went to turn chair back round)
9:wait a second, we didn't finish talking to you(BIG IOI),
the other lad takes the hint and fucks off lol
ME: (stays facing away from my friends for a minute to build tension, grabs the beer my boss just bought me to worm his way in, has a swig then turns back round 90 degrees.) What do you want to talk to me about?
9: (General bullshit about england, can't be arsed to type it, then she starts giving me IOI's, and i kino her. I start to feel that i have gained rapport with her,about fifteen mintures have passed.)
ME: (called my wing over, he walks up to the 7, the obstacle, and takes a seat next to her, i introduce him, she smiles and they engage in conversation.) to the 9: when i turned round to ask your opinion, i thought you were just two random girls, but you seem to have a good energy about you.
9: (SMILES) thanks, how long are you staying in the hotel for???
ME: I'm not, we're her for tonight for a drink, we go back to sea tommorow, but you might here from me again if your lucky. (we didn't but i was fucking duty.) Anyway, i've gotta go, (the lads were beckoning me, coach back was outside, my wing walks off, and her friend goes toilet whilst smiling and keeps glancing over on the way).
9: (playful frown as i said we wern't staying, but smiled when i said she might hear from me again, i put my hand out palm up non-obviously, she grabs it, i squeeze and she squeezes back, i instantly let go, but she trys to grip it back.) okay, i'd love to hear from you again,(gets her phone out) take my number.
ME: (gets my phone out) okay,(copied her number to my phone. i dunno how it happened but i gave her her phone back and he were holding both hands again. she gives me an IOI by looking into my eyes, so i kiss her, and she kisses me back. I then say bye and leave, she texts me saying she had a great time talking to me.)

I go back ship, back to sea, and NO FUCKING SIGNAL ANYWHERE!

that was my first proper pua experience, i had tried before that in the same bar with other girls, but they were all being flocked by drunken matlows lol. The next day a cheif approaches me and says that he was impressed because they ignored the other lads. My boss says i should've closed the deal. mosts of the beggeining sould like a question and answer type of convo, it wasn't but they are the key bits.

Anyway, review my technique please, criticise away as necessary.